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Last post 10-06-2008 10:42 AM by shazza. 2 replies.
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  • 10-02-2008 5:59 PM

    • shazza
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    Ncis story written by sharon Anne Bell

    Chapter One First Mind Murder The Naval Criminal Investigative Service (NCIS) is the United States Department of the Navy's primary law enforcement agency and successor to the former Naval Investigative Service (NIS). Formed: 1882Headquarters: Washington Navy YardEmployees: 2,400Agency Executive: Thomas A Bettor, DirectorWebsite: www.ncis.navy.mil Roughly, half of the Naval Criminal Investigative Service (NCIS) 2400 employees are civilian special agents. They are trained to carry out a wide variety of assignments at locations across the globe. NCIS special agents are armed federal law enforcement investigators and frequently coordinate with other US government agencies. NCIS special agents are supported by analysts and other experts skilled in disciplines such as forensics, surveillance and surveillance countermeasures, computer investigations, physical security, and polygraph examinations. 

    In 1992 the NIS became a mostly civilian agency. Roy D. Ned row, a former United States Secret Service (USSS) executive, was appointed as the first civilian director and the name changed from Naval Investigative Service to Naval Criminal Investigative Service. Virtually all NCIS investigators, criminal, counterintelligence, and force protection personnel are now sworn civilian personnel with powers of arrest and warrant service. The exceptions are a small number of reserve military eleme.

     

    At the NCIS in Washington three Agent’s were sitting at there desk talking to each other or arguing, well two of them where, Tony and Kate were having a conversation or argument about a small Photo of Kate.

    Tony had posted the photo onto the internet for all agents in the NCIS to see, she was not happy about this at all, Gibbs had still not arrived yet for work; he was very late for some unknown reason.

    Kate Todd was a lovely Woman with her long black hair and her well dress manner, wearing a skirt a white blouse and a jacket with lovely black high hells on but when someone push her she expressed her feelings very formally.

    Kate: "How the hell could you Tony"

    Tony Dinozzo is tough and knows how to work the system. Young, brash and with plenty of comic relief, he's always trying to make ground on the more experienced Gibbs, with is sexy brown hair a charming suits he wears, he always finds that torment Kate is idea of fun

    Tony: "Well you know me i see it i have to have it"

    She looked at him with here lovely green eyes.

    Kate: "Sometimes you can be such a"

    Tim McGee was a naive Special Agent. With tremendous respect for Special Agent Gibbs, McGee is an intelligent agent with a specific talent for computers, but awkwardness in social situations.                                     His Dark Brown hair and wonderful suits and great tie’s make him smart and well dress

    McGee: "*** i think is the word you’re looking for”

    Sergeant, Gibbs is an experienced criminal investigator and a highly skilled interrogator. A born leader with great focus, Gibbs' often-unorthodox approach and willingness to bend the rules always gets the job done.

     

    His Grey hair always looks good and his suit jacket and white shirt with wearing always a pair of jeans looking good and sexy usual looked at McGee and asked.

     

    Gibbs: "Who is an *** McGee?”

    He looked at the three of them as he stood at his desk, as three others were around him with many others around the area with stairs leading up to the directors’ office and the security operation room where the big job’s of terrorizes or other stuff go down.

    Anyway, He got his answer.   

    McGee: "Tony Sir That was what Kate was going to say"

    McGee looked up to Gibbs he was a good leader and never let any of the team down, but he would let you know if you where doing your job well or doing it not so well.

    He found his witty remakes very funny sometimes and other times a lot scary or very scary but he still looked up to him, say like a father figure in that sort of way.   

    Gibbs: "Yeah i know he is an ***"

     Tony was just going to answer to that comment when Gibbs mobile phone rang; he put down is costa coffe plastic cup drink onto his large desk and answered. 

    Tony, Kate and McGee waited for when he finished, he looked up at the three of them after shutting his mobile closed and putting down on his desk were his computer and other sort of computer stuff sat on it,

    He open the draw under is desk and took out his gun he looked up at Tony, Kate and Tim and Said.Gibbs: "its Abby guys she has been shout outside Adam East Museum Art Centre, she was on holiday with her friend when it happen she has been taken to Washington hospital".

    Tony, Kate and McGee sat there quiet Gibbs was wondering who would will hurt poor little sweat abbey, he had no clue now, but he will eventually find it out.

    Why would anyone won’t to hurt poor little Abby and why, Gibbs was not sure it was eating away inside him, suddenly a voice spoke from the stairs

    Jenny: Gibbs my office now”

    Jenny Shephard the new Director of NCIS. Fiercely independent, with a direct no-nonsense approach, coupled with being an old flame of Gibb’s, she is assured to add some spice to proceedings at headquarters.

    Her sort red hair looked very lovely and wearing a blue skirt and jacket with a cream top and with her light brown tights and black high hells.

    She stood waiting for Gibbs to follow her up the stairs to her office and speak to him, finally he followed as Tony, Kate and Tim watch him walk up with and disappears into one of the doors leading to her office.

    Was Gibbs to loose his job or was Jenny after him for something else what ever it was the three of them would never find out, it was strictly Business between Director Shephard and Agent Gibbs and no one would ever know about it.

     

    s.a.bell
  • 10-03-2008 3:42 PM In reply to

    Re: Ncis story written by sharon Anne Bell

    If you want to impress the writters then try spell check. 

    Gibbette
  • 10-06-2008 10:42 AM In reply to

    • shazza
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    To duckie from Sharon Anne Bell

    Hey Duckie,

    My friend Marion Is checking my story hopefully it will be in better condition, I have Eductional Learning Difficultes and never write my story's by hand, I always use the computer.

    She has told me to look up more on the cast members before writing my story, would you read it when written better.

    Thanks Sharon Anne Bell      

    s.a.bell
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